Feedback on semi-realistic render

This render isn’t supposed to be super realistic, the point was to have a little bit of realism added in with your standard Roblox character.

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These are the models used in the render. They were downloaded online, I did not create the models.

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Pretty basic render which was to test my PBR texturing.

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I think the renders are pretty good tbh but I do have one suggestion. The words Battle Hardened are very hard for me to read. I also feel that they are blocking the most interesting part of your image. I would bring the words down and enlarge the. Then maybe change the colour to something that would contrast and be more visible … like red/orange (the colour of the reflection on the trigger) or even just add a red outline and keep the silver… I think that the gun model will be a draw for your game and that you don’t want to cover it…

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