Feedback on shack

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#1

Hello,

Me and a friend recently created a little shack using Blender and studio, and it would be great to have some feedback.

I was going for an old, run down style, with a haphazard feeling.

Some screenshots:

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For anyone wondering, here is the game link: random game lol - Roblox

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#2

Looks good. One suggestion I would make is to change the text transparency. Right now it seems a bit out of place. Try to change the text transparency and color to blend in with the wood in the background. Other than that it looks incredible! =)

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