Recently I’ve made a showcase I call “Nexus” (soon I may change it to N.E.X.U.S)
I want you guys to give feedback. Please be respectful when replying and giving feedback as well. Here’s the link to the game: N.E.X.U.S - Roblox
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Honestly, the build is quite empty. There are small islands connected to the larger island by (I assume the rope plugin), it’s too thin. There is a lack of detail to the build itself. I think you should spend more time on it. I think I saw maybe 4? unique models.
Also, some people prefer to see pictures sometimes so maybe adding pictures to your post would be good.
~Shinyju.
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can you go into more detail about the reply? what can i improve? your a bit unclear, sorry.
The rope here that connects the islands is too thin. I know you used a rope plugin for it but it can be resized to be better.
In this area, you could use more detail. What I saw are the island, trees, and two neon cylinders and two cylinders. Overall, more can be added.
The big island is honestly okay.
Jus there’s this grass mesh floating around near it.
~Shinyju.
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thank you for the feedback, ill take into consideration all the things you pointed out in this reply.
I think it looks really good! Here’s some things I think could be improved:
- The tops of the little drill machines. They look a little bit empty, maybe add like a dome or something.
- The waterfall. It lacks character to me, and I might be worth a shot to use this waterfall plugin.Waterfall Generator - Roblox
- needs less blur.
Some things I liked:
- The terrain design looked pretty good to me.
- I like the sounds.
I think it needs some work, but I can see this being an awesome showcase in the future!
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thank you for the feedback! I don’t really like the waterfall generator but ill give it a show! ill take into consideration everything you said. thank you so much for the feedback!
edit: Sorry, but I’m having complications with the waterfall generator. I might need to scrap the waterfall generator idea. I apologize.
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No need to apologize! If it doesn’t work for you, then that’s fine!
I just finished using your feedback!
here’s some photos:
I decreased the blur and added some detail onto the top of the mining drones. i may improve on the details in the future because i think they’re too basic
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Thank you very much for your feedback! here’s some photos of what i improved
i added more detail to the island, i may improve the details in the future and may even make the island bigger!
i made the cables bigger as well.
Ii also removed the grass mesh floating i think)
Thank you so much for the feedback! ill look on improving in the future.
A showcase should make people say “oooh wow cool” not “oh ok”, I base the quality of a showcase on how much it makes me want to see a persons other works
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Can you suggest things that can be improved? What do you not like about the showcase? Please don’t leave me in the dark about these things. All you have said is how you judge the quality of showcases. Please provide feedback on this so i may improve the showcase.
I love the improvements! Good job!
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well the terrain is boring, the robotic parts need more detail, the sky is boring, the dock needs more detail, and just general improvments to other features, also the high gravity is annoying and makes it hard to get around
thank you for the feedback! ill get to work right away and ill update you on improvements. thanks a lot for the feedback! could you elaborate more on how i can spice up the terrain and what kind details can I add onto the robots?
edit: (ok I know what the dock is now)
well the robots just seem placed, if you want them like automated drills add joints and wires, something that makes them seem like they can actually move along with the legs making it look like they are balanceing instead of just splayed out, as for the terrain maybe look at pictures of floating islands to get a better shape, also add some flowers and rocks, something that makes it seem less like a barren wasteland, also some details in the distance, birds, airships maybe a floating castle, just anything that makes it seem less like a blip in the void and more like an actual world
thanks a lot for clarifying! ill try to follow this to the best of my abilities!