Feedback on simple kamehameha

I’m definitely no vfx artist and I’ve never tried making a power before but here’s my attempt, took me around 6 hours.
Any feedback on how/what I should improve about it would be appreciated, thank you.

Edit1: *Volume is a bit loud, make sure to turn it down before playing

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Make the animation a bit better if possible, And use more particles instead of just 2 parts

But this is a good start!

EDIT: Idk if you have this but add sounds, Sounds play a massive part in immersion.

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its good very good for your 1st try

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Your suggestion for them to improve?

Hm, I’d say look at a reference, Plus, It’s kinda too “robotic” rn i suggest them to do the pose irl and try to copy the movements to make it look realistic.

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Added your suggestions, feedback on those too maybe?

better, make the power up not be like a cylinder expanding, make it like a flash, and make the part of cylinder and sphere intersect not be darker by like making each separate or something idk, and make the sphere in the hands grow, and you need better posing and animation definitely, and also maybe make sure it works with different body types if its for a game

and the sound is weird and the particles should be same color, and have it not just be cylinder and sphere lol
its also kind of robotic and he just stays still without doing anything while charging up

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Also, A camerashake would look pretty nice with it, Just don’t make it too intense.