Hi Developers! I Would Love Some Feedback On My Small Cafe I’ve Built For A Group. I Would Love Constructive Criticism And Feel Free To Be Brutally Honest!
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Thank You! 
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I liked it! I thought it was very cute.
The thing that jumped out at me the most was the aliasing. Maybe consider using textures instead of lots of small parts in the future? Not sure if it will help. The nuclear option is of course to make fewer small patterned things and/or turn off reflectance when you do make small, patterned things.
You do have a confusing area behind the registers. What’s that dance floor doing back there? Maybe a kitchen would make more sense.
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Thanks! My client actually wanted me to leave the kitchen as a blank slate. I was wondering which area in particular jumped out as a lot of small parts/over-detailed?
Those metal chairs outside render pretty funny. Some of the ceiling elements have a lot of aliasing, too.
Others in the place were complaining about the reflectance being too high, so toning that down overall might pay off.
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Ok! Thank You! 30 characterssssssss
I really do like it! Good lob with the meshes the coloring the materials and texures! I really like how it’s small and it fits. However, I found some small things that I disliked but those aren’t really something to worry about. I just disliked it a bit.
Maybe try lowering this chair I do understand it is supposed to be high but my feet are literally touching the table
I’m not a big fan of using Reflectance especially inside but that is just my opinion if you like it that is all that matters!
I forgot to take a photo of the water maybe try bringing the transparency down to 1 so it will seem clear or more realistic!
BUT Other then that I think it does really look good! I hope to see more of your builds in the future!
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Thank you! I think those chairs are unanchored. In studio they are much lower.
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I like it, too bad that I can’t build it.
But I am looking for builders that can build like you!
Hey I checked out your cafe! I think it is Really pretty!
A lot of small details that really give it a realistic feel, like the outlets on the sides of the counter 
I loved the exposed piping for the ceiling, you gave that chill warehouse vibe a very neat aesthetic touch!
I think you did a great job, only thing I noticed to be a bit off was the high stools lol but I see someone else has already raised concerns about their feet touching the table 
Over all, I think you did an incredible job! Keep up the great work! Also… the curvy palm tress are adorable and made me laugh lol I love them!
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Heyo,I think its really good but some problems i had about it is,
The chairs need to be shorter,or tables a little bit higher
.I would fix this so its not that random or match it with the other chairs around it.
whenever your around one of the glass pains you can see the grass through it idk if there’s a way to fix it its just something i saw
lastly i would add a barrier around the glass fence.
Sorry if this was long i just wanted to note stuff i thought were odd,But over all its pretty good
Thank you so much! I’m glad you noticed the little details I put in!
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The glass thing is a Roblox bug, I’m sure they will fix it soon because it is pretty annoying.