Feedback on Smoothie Parlour Building?

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Not quite furnished yet

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#2

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added wall to 2nd floor

#3

I’m not sure if you’re going for the modern feel, but if you are, the brick textures don’t really give off the modern feel, if not, the build is otherwise nice.

#4

When I think of a parlor, I think of like a cartoony place, think of the audience you are trying to reach. For me, I feel it would look better in low poly with no brick. Simply because it doesn’t fit the feel of the building, it looks like a modern style but the brick simply isn’t giving me that.

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#5

If not parlour, then restaurant?

What textures would you recommend?

#6

I recommend plastic, or smooth plastic.

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#7

If the game is realistic, then probably metal, but if cartoony like sn8i said, then smooth plastic.

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All brick replaced with metal.

#9

Maybe turn down the reflectance on the metal, it reflects too much now. :sweat_smile:

#10

This is a good start and I like the progress that you’re making.

However, I do feel that there are some fundamental components that might need changing. I think the color palette in general (lots of blacks and greys especially) doesn’t really give me the idea of a smoothie parlor. If I were to look at this building with no context to know what it’s supposed to represent, I wouldn’t really think it’s a smoothie parlor. It’s far too dark imo. I think most establishments would prefer to go with a higher variety of vibrant colors to keep a constant theme of colorful smoothies, etc.

I also think the metal that you’ve added now makes the build a little too reflective. It comes off more as a fancy hall. I’m not sure if you’re willing to do these changes, and if you’re not then I understand, but I think reworking the color palette and material use from the ground up might be a better choice. Good luck!

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#11

I don’t think that the style of the building matches what you’re going for. This could simply be from the fact that it’s not done yet but when I think smoothie parlor I think bright colors with colorful patterns not dark colors with brick/metal materials.

I don’t want to give any suggestions now since it’s not finished and I can’t see the idea clearly because of it. It’s not bad, it just doesn’t fit the theme exactly