Feedback on Sniper Tower

So I decided to build something “realistic” for my game. Y’know, no smooth plastic and cartoony builds. Realism isn’t exactly my strong suit, and building as a skill isn’t my strong suit either. But I decided to go for it anyway, and I tried my best, now I’d like some feedback on it.

Anyways, I made a sniper tower for my sniping game. Can’t have a sniper game without towers, right? Here is my build.

Updated version #2:




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In my opinion, it’s a good build.

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It still looks pretty cartoony. Adding a material doesn’t flip it upside down. This tower is good but you should make it taller and add more detail

Can you suggest to me what details to add? I’m not really sure what to change.

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This look good but this look not real , you need change material or color so is will look good and real !

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Now that I think about it, I think it isn’t so realistic because it’s too basic. I’m looking at pictures of sniper towers as I’m writing this reply, and I’m matching details with the images. I’ll edit my topic with the updated tower when I’m done.

You could add metal beams between the four pillars at the bottom. You could add better structural design and make the tower taller. You could add metal railings etc… it just doesn’t look realistic. Try different colors

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Yes , you can make it real or not real but this color you choose look cartoon , you choose color look old , example : brown , black , …

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I think this look good but not much detail so you could add a little more.

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Alright, I made a hopefully better, more realistic version. Darker colors (although you probably won’t be able to see it), Railing, or whatever they’re called, and some X’s between pillars holding up the tower.

Test the pic Example like this , this is model not in roblox but you can refer .

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Looks plain for a sniper tower, could be taller. Don’t know what the look your going for but it’s decent.

Not really a good reference for a sniper tower…

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I’m trying to go for a sleek and decently realistic look for my sniping tower. I’ve updated the lighting a bit, added a stripe, and some bars on the bottom.

this is realy cool, i dont think that its too realistic but its made amazinly

it’s great, but I don’t understand why the roof is metal.

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