This is my very first music track and I’m happy about it! It’s a DnB/electronic/trance type of music. So this track is called “Final Years”. (Its a loop so it cuts at the end)
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I think the song is nice. I wouldn’t listen to it in my free time to enjoy it, however I think it could be used in a video game sound track.
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Sounds great! When I hear it though, I think of this as background music for a trailer for a game.
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That’s pretty good, I like the synthetic piano in the background.
I do think that your lead synth is a little overpowering, and it kind of drowns out the rest of the tracks.
I recommend putting a reverb and EQ on it.
Another thing is the drums; great pattern, it’s nice and quantized, but the drum set is more fitting for a rock / metal song. Do you have any other drum packs, like perhaps an 808 or 909 drum set pack? That might fit the song more.
Overall, it sounds good for your first song, and I wish you best luck in the music production!
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Try add some reese bass somewhere, it would definitely fit if it was added.
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I think this song is good! Although it lacks bass. But overall this is a nice song!
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Ok, so ever since I’ve heard of all of you’re replies, I decided to make a better version. It’s a bit of the same (DnB/electronic/trance) except I changed the beginning to expand the track. The orchestral and main synths were tweaked a bit and the drums are the same.(The drums was a Tom and a Snare to make it feel more tribe-ish)
(Hear the song before voting below!)
Do you think the new version of the song was better?
- The new version is better
- The original was better
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