I’m a beginner in making GFX, so please give some feedback! Thanks
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If you hadn’t said you were a beginner I wouldn’t have known! This is pretty good in my opinion!
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Looks really good. Well done! 
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Looks amazing for a beginner im GFX, as most GFX artist they spend their time on the lighting and view of the camera. I suggest changing up the lighting or the camera view.
For example;
for me I would say that is too reflective. Keep on making!
-uD0ge
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It looks way too good for a beginner. Anyways, nice job!
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Alright, I’ll keep that in mind. Thanks!
Coming from a person with little experience making GFXs, I think your GFXs are really well-done. I don’t really like the text on the first image (unless it is meant to be a watermark). Also, try to make the lighting look for realistic.
Overall you did a good job
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Meant as a watermark. Thanks for your feedback!
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I really like the smoothness of the characters and I also really like the choice of clothing. A few of my suggestions would be…
- Use a different background for the first image
- Use a different text color for the first image, one that stands out
- Try to play around with the lighting more in the last image, you can look at a tutorial here:
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On your first 2 images, it seems like the legs are unattached and your torso is floating.
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Looks quit nice maybe add some shadows to maybe give the gfx more depths.
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Alright lets take it in order.
First photo
This depends on the artist’s preferences but personally i wouldn’t include a real life picture in a virtual GFX theme game. It just doesn’t find the place. This does NOT mean i hate your artwork, its really good!
Second photo
Nothing to complain about. As always , personally i wouldn’t choose that face since is associated with Online Dating (in many communities) and is really really used by many other devs in their GFX. I would find a face who fits the avatar’s look and its original.
Third photo
The avatar about to get robbed is kinda floating and the lighting looks red ish. Other than that i really love this.
Last photo
Only the lighting on the face and hand makes the avatar look flat, but theres nothing to point in this artwork.
Per total, you did an extremely awesome job. Congrats and keep the good work! 
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This is excellent GFX work for a Beginner! I’m not a professional at GFX art, but I can critique a few things in the first photo.
The GFX, background, and text in the first photo do not go well together. Perhaps something that matches their accessories can go well as the background.
The text is very simple, try browsing through a selection of fonts and experiment with each one, with different colors as well. I also recommend you put a stroke on the text, and perhaps a slight shadow. Overall, loving this! This is great work for a beginner. (:
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