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#1

i want this to be played in the background at a sci-fi bar but i think its a little too busy, what are your thoughts?

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#2

you should probably make the loop more smooth y’know

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#3

The song kinda goes all over the place, you should also add a few more instruments and a steady rythym.

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#4

its cool, for what kind of game is this song?

#5

cough cough idk probably a simulator game trol