Feedback on ''Stage 1'' of my game's tutorial

Any ideas are appreciated.
(Don’t mind the watermark, I used a file compressor)


Plus, I should point out that it isn’t 100% done yet, I need to make more audio’s to get more voice lines to help out on how to do stuff.)

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I like the way you’ve been utilizing somewhat voice audio for a tutorial here, pretty unique in a sense.

In order to further clarify the ideas & perspectives for this game’s tutorial, is there a particular genre or objective of the game? This’ll help us out with straight forward ideas in order to fit in with the game itself.

However, pretty random idea from me, what if you had different voice “actors” in order to distinguish different tones of the objectives. You could even make parts of the subtitles bold to imply a sense of anger or roughness etc.

I look forward to seeing the outcome of the tutorial, good luck! :v:

That is just the tutorial that will explain in the future on how to do stuff in the game. The game will probably not have voice acting. It is a solo story game.
In it, you find yourself alone in a raft, so as I said, the tutorial explains the physics of the game itself.

And thank you so much! :cowboy_hat_face:

Links

Deep Ocean [2021 = Private] - Roblox
Deep Ocean [Tutorial/Help] - Roblox

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