Feedback on Stage 1 of my obby

I am making a tower type of obby and all I have done so far is a section of stage 1 and that is why its all white. Please tell me if you think it is good/bad and what other obstacles I could add to it to fill in the space.

Here is the game link if you want to try it out and see whether is good or not:

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Well, for starters, I would highly recommend giving the obby some contrast. Some players might mess up if they see all white colors.

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Ah. Blindness. Very cool.
In all seriousness though please don’t use just solid white.

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Thanks for the feedback! I have made it slightly darker.

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make the wallhop a bit wider
for stage 1 the wrap arrounds might be difficulty for some players
the neon parts can mess up people’s sight
the tightropes are barely visible tbh

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I changed the colour of the tightropes to red and changed the killpart material

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change the baseplate color please

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Does this look good?

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MUCH BETTER, yes this is very great for my eyes!

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Won’t the baseplate be deleted in the final product? Also gray isn’t a very clear color for killparts :confused:

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i see red parts so i guess those are killbricks

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i meant when he showcased the stage i couldn’t really see much so i asked him to change the baseplate color

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Would this be better for the killparts? It is still grey but I changed the material.

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yeah its like the jtoh kill parts, very nice

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