I made this gfx for a Jedi Consulars group icon, based on other existing gfx. I could really use some criticism. One person told me it looked too plastic like so I went back and added more texture, and redid the hair/robes, another told me it was too bright, etc. Anything like that would be very helpful for improving my skills.
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Looks pretty good, the face is just a bit blurry. The other thing I would suggest is pushing the lightsaber back so it looks as if he’s gripping it.
Also the hair is shining? Im a big Star Wars fan tho and love this.
Bit blurry and the watermark is hard to see and can easily be stolen.
too green and that hair looks cringe
About the hair, do you mean the hair accessory as far as the style, or the way I textured it?
the back just looks too low res, it looks more like a game asset I would probably either add some sort of bump map (just by using the hair uv and using the darker areas to control the bump) or getting a new hair model
I would also make the volumetric so it doesn’t cover up the whole scene but instead scattered across with like a noise pattern idk (or in beams)
something’s wrong with the lighting… and… get a better background
also thatguy’s hair looks like wEIRD
6.5/10