Feedback on story game house

Hello! I’ve recently picked up an old story game I was working on, and in the process revamped the starting house. Wanted to garner feedback on what I should add/modify. Do note this is for mobile and only a fraction of the game takes place here. Thank you!

Game Link: (1) The Factory [Story] (In Development) - Roblox

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Any feedback is greatly appreciated, as this is my first time making a house without an reference work :slight_smile:

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These rooms are kinda too empty, maybe add some lights, and picture frames on the wall for the living room, then add some details to the shelves like books and stuff. Some lamps in the bedroom. This house isn’t bad but could look more interesting by adding the details I mentioned.

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I think the lightning doesnt do the build and layout enough justice. Try tweaking it, to give it that much needed extra oomph and then share some new screenshots.

Other than that, fill some rooms with more stuff on the walls and maybe look up color combinations to make the house and its decorations more pleasant to look at.

Nice job so far!

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