Hello everyone!
My dev team and I have been working really hard on a story game, I’m looking for some feedback before I sponsor it! Do you think it is good enough for front page? (there are still a few bugs being fixed and thumbnail is being made right now!)
Thanks!
Okay, so let’s start from the beginning. Few bugs here and there.
This is the loading screen:
I like the snow effect of the lobby. But I do think you should have the loading screen in the same place and not in a different place as the lobby. And probably have some transitions to the Ui.
Thirdly. The text when the NPC’s are talking is abit buggy in the start as its like 2 people are talking together. And I died of nowhere as soon as we were told to enter the house…The pop-ub to revive was very late… and my internet has no problem. I do like the Shop and invite ui buttons. and the game logo. I do like the animations after a certain response. I do see potential in the game. Otherwise I like the sound effects too. Just abit of touch-ups and alot of testing here and there and you’ll be set to release. Try making really good GFX’s for the logo and Thumbnail as that is what players see first. Otherwise good job and good luck! 
NOTE: If you are sponsoring the game I’d reckon you check out if the game is compatible and working on other platforms too. Which will save you a ton of criticism.
@OfficiallySpo_oky Thanks for the great feedback, and yeah the logo will be there! I’m glad you like the icon, as I do too!
We are planning on testing on mobile and ipad devices before the launch. And thanks for letting me know of that bug, we’ll look into it!
Thanks!!
It needs an icon and thumbnail.
@RedStoneDeveloper Yea, it is still being made! Did you run into any bugs?
You should use TeleportService:SetTeleportGui(UI_NAME) in your teleport between places to make it look better
@RedStoneDeveloper Thanks, I’ll tell my programmer!