This is the first model I have ever made and it took an hour 
Currently I consider it a prototype because it appears crude and I’m bad with picking colours…
Please provide any feedback/criticism thank you 
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Perhaps adding round parts on the handle, to look more of it being a handle. Aswell of changing the handle tips of a darker shade of grey.
Here is a image for more information
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I fiddled around for a bit and here’s what I got
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That would be a great idea but my potato laptop would probably crash if I tried to use blender (I know from experience). Do you have any ideas for the colouring though? I have absolutely no taste in colour
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It seems you forgot about the handle though… 
Everything else is fine too fyi
Erm I rounded the handle and made the tips a bit darker… can’t figure out what I missed out 
I think it’s a bit thick for its height. Maybe make it taller?
I did the sword according to the recommended blade/handle ratio and the it is impossible to change the height of the sword unless I start from scratch I’ll try to make it taller for a broadsword. (I’m planning to make it a dagger if it doesn’t work out lol)
I would rework or redo the handle. The blade itself looks good, but the handle looks pretty basic in comparison, and stylistically it doesn’t seem to mesh or fit well with the rest of the sword. (by handle I mean the brown part and down)
I would maybe redo it to flow better into the rest of the sword too, instead of just looking like the blade was pasted on top of it. I do like the bottom triangle part of the handle though.
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You’re try to apart made details.About color - think, there will always be taste buds and saturation in your head
I think the weapon could have a few improvements, especially the handle. Also, I would try different color combinations with the blade instead of just red/blue. I would focus on improving the look of the handle first then move on to adding more details.
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I like the style, but I think the colours of the gems are a little too strong in saturation.
Beside that, perhaps use a material like Metal or Ice, or create your own texture to add scratches, indentation, and genera wear. Those little details really tell about the owner’s story.
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I don’t know how to create textures at the moment, but I’ll make sure to learn sometime tomorrow As for the colouring, I don’t have any taste in colour so I set it to change randomly.
I think its a bit big…
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Thank you all for the feedback I got to retire for today but I’ll make sure to:
Redo the handle
Resize the sword
Add textures
Etc :3