I tried my best! Hope you like it!
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If I were to rate it out of 10, I’d give it a 5. Like, I can look at that and be like, “Yeah, that’s a tank”, although it’s a bit bulky, and it feels really rushed. Also, most tanks have a place in them where you can like sit down and go pew pew, although I don’t really see that from the one angle you provided us with. Can you give us more angles, because I can’t really give much feedback with just one viewpoint. Otherwise, it’s pretty good.
I like it. But it’s a little simple. I would rate it a 6 or 7 out of 10.
I suggest adding detail. It looks plain, especially for what we have people building nowadays. It also need a hatch at the top for people to enter. Overall it isn’t the worst but could be decent with some improvements.
In my opinion, I agree with @coolestgamet. It’s plain, undetailed really. For refrence, 
< Try adding textures!
Make it look more appealing to one’s eye, is what I’m trying to say. By adding textures, and making it looked not-so-rushed, I think it’d look much better. 6 - 7 out of 10.
(Also for some feedback, according to everything I’ve seen, the ammo box of a tank isn’t outside. It’s inside in a compartment. So the ammo would be hidden.)
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I agree with what @Disparrel said. Maybe adding textures would help this instead of Roblox’s colors. Based on the pic that @Disparrel sent I can see a huge difference. I also see, as @ZehTopHat said, it is very bulky. Maybe make the hatch a bit less round and more like the picture @Disparrel sent. I hope this helped @ProGamerYT676.
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I am guessing that you went for a low-poly build.
First of all, the tank is a bit too blocky, you can see it and understand that it is a tank, but it looks like it has no to barely any features. (And it looks like it doesn’t shoot since the shooting part is closed (Idk what it’s called))
Also could you try adding more pictures from different angles so we can actually see what it really looks like?
You also need a bit more detail, looking at the builds we have from creators today, that has no chance against them.
It looks pretty special to me. I don’t know what its called, but the place where a soldier stays to fire at others looks unique because you used a sphere rather than a simple rectangle which makes this tank really stands out. If you don’t get what I mean, this is what I’m saying:
However, there is a problem with the lack of texture there is to this tank. If you want, you could go for a camouflage that has a metallic look for this build.
7/10 Just Needs More Green Colours 
I went for a low-poly build type, but its not the best! Im not the best at building and i just wanted a challenge of sorts!
i will take your suggestions!
I will make a update post later on!
Looks pretty good. I would recommend looking at references pictures from online to make a more accurate tank.
Awesome job man!
Im Working On The Tank As We Speak! Im taking Your Guys Suggestions!
As most of the developers are saying;
Add More Detail>
Be creative with it and spice it up, by adding textures to make it look nice, by adding more details to give it a more realistic feel, and try to mesh a few things to reduce the lag (if it lags).
I cant find any good textures to use on it and i am working on it now.
If you’re familiar with PBR Textures, you should use those.
For textures, you can use some from here, https://www.textures.com/, i highly suggest.
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How would i use these textures? Or Like how do i put them on the tank?
Download the textures from the site, save it to your PC;
Then go here https://www.roblox.com/develop, and then click “Decals”, then Click Upload select the texture and then go to Roblox studio, open your tank file and go into workspace>my models>my decals, then click it and click an area on the tank, i recommend you use the “Texture” feature.
The Only Problem Is That The Texture Is To Small, And To Make it any bigger i have to get premium on there and im not spending 100 Dollars
Hey there! I really love tanks and have a couple of suggestions. In my opinion, you don’t have to use meshes, and I frequently use parts and unions to build tanks. Here are a couple of suggestions. I give feedback I think is perfectly do-able, and won’t suggest things that are impossibly hard or annoying.
- The turret does not have to be rounded, but it’s definitely not detailed enough, not even for a low poly tank, try flattening the top a bit, or if you don’t want to, you could try a single hatch on the top of the sphere.
- The barrel is just a cylinder, simply unionize it to create a more realistic barrel.
- The hull of the tank is awfully blocky. You can build a low poly tank without it looking like this. The closest tank I can think of that this could be is a T55-A Russian MBT.
-Try adding more details, such as machine guns, a gun mantlet, hatches, Night vision equipment, etc.
- Instead of putting ammo outside of the tank, create an ammo stowage area.
- Try adding a gunner’s sight.
- Not all tanks have a simple rectangle turret either, so you could construct a turret from a mix of parts.
- Try adding some personal items/added armor such as sandbags, ammo crates, or helmets on the tank.
- Are there any roadwheels, a place for exhaust or anything else? If so, post more photos, please.
- For a simple example to show I’m not setting impossible standards, check out my model of the Panzer IV H.
Link: Panzer 4 H - Roblox
As I said, I give feedback I think is good. Honestly, I rate this tank 6/10 due to the seemingly rushed feel of it. Anyway, happy building 
!
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This is very good for a first build if it is. It’s good, but things you can really improve on is to add a lot more detail. For example, you can add textures and small extra parts, it honestly looks too plain and a rushed a bit, but yeah more detail surrounding it would be great! Keep up the work!