Feedback on Teaser

This is one work from Delirium that me and my team made. Try to solve this riddle!

Including something that is visually interesting would help. If the teaser only comprises of words there are a couple problems. First is that people may not trust in your ability to make a game. Anyone can write a quick cryptic message. Making a compelling image takes a little more craftsmanship. Second is that the viewer may not trust in your ability to make a satisfying payoff to your text. For all I know, entering this binary into a converter could just lead to some bland, uninteresting message. The dynamic would be different if you had already showed something interesting w/o requiring anything from the viewer.

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Creepy. Will this be a horror game?

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I have removed the Binary Code and we do include screenshots. Delirium : Horror Game - Help and Feedback / Cool Creations - DevForum | Roblox , But it was in another topic. Thank you for your feedback!

The button color is almost unclear. I suggest you change it to a brighter color.

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Thank you for the feedback. I’ll try to improve my teasers in the future.

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