Yo , just made this cool commission and I’m pretty proud of it, wanted to hear your thoughts on it
Here is my portfolio if you want to order: Click
Here is my portfolio if you want to order: Click
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I would suggest taking away the background of the text logo and just having the text there.
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It’s very nice and clean, I like the motion blur. The island is really good and I love the font you’ve used.
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That looks a lot better! Now try making the text a little big larger so it takes up about 90% of the lower screen space.
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Smooth rim lights, the text looks super cool, I don’t really have anything to say all of it is just perfect.
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Pretty good except I caught a odd blue stroke on the bacon hair.
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Oh! That is there intentionally, it’s rim-lighting, if it looks weird tell me.
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Yeah it looks like a accident to me, perhaps blur it a bit if it’s a lighting effect?
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Alright! Will take this into consideration! Thanks.
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No problem and if I were you I wouldn’t go back to the I made a new game thread. There are some toxic kids there rn.
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Good Job! It look very nice 9.5/10
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Thanks a ton! Any feedback that could make it 10/10?