I have been working on this factory for 8 hours now and i feel like theres something missing, I also feel like it looks like something that was made in 20 mins. Can I please have some feedback on my game so i can improve my building skills and improve the map.
Here is the link: The Box Factory - Roblox
I can see your game but here some of my feedback:
Feedback:
1 need better graphics for the game.
2 the build is too simple to build but it was a start so it needs to improve and better build.
3 color of the box is different from the decal. (you need to clour to look same with decal)
4 the sign kinda weird to read. ( you can use the marketplace to make sign much better)
anyway, this the thing you need to improve and I hope you read this feedback to know that you need a better build. so if you practice all day it will be much more unique i hope you have a wonderful day…Seeya
I think for starters, the boxes are all the same. I know it’s not easy to vary buildings and stuff, especially in limited time. But it really makes it look very plain.
I would recommend, instead of worrying about how much time it is taking you, try and ask yourself how you can make it better - is this something you would play, or something that looks appealing? Sharpening your skills, falling down, getting back up - it’s all part of the process in improving. I think it would be good not just for us to tell you what needs improvement, but for you yourself to take a hard think and try to find places to improve on yourself, and share that with us. If you aren’t good at modelling, maybe try to learn how to do that. Sure, complex things like 3D modelling is difficult and takes a LONG time, like months, to get to a good workflow. But it will be much more worth your time than taking decals of eBay and catalog items for something you built in just 8 hours. 8 hours isn’t that long by the way, games take months, sometimes years just to get to a good standard.
I would also add, scripting can really bring a game to life. I know you may not necessarily be good at programming, but perhaps that is something worth looking into. It’s good to be aware of the inner functioning of games and know how it connects to the 3D world itself.
So yeah, try to think of some things that you didn’t like about your place, and let me know so we can continue the discussion. I think a box factory is a timely idea, seeing that the catalog is being spammed with boxes at the moment.
Thanks I will note that down and try to improve.
Ok thanks I have read through your reply/comment and im considering trying what you said