Hey DevForums! I am Jack, Main Scripter and Secondry builder for a game called State of Packston, we are in V5 are it is W.I.P. I’m looking for some advice. Can you guys provide some?
Here they are:
I feel like your build is getting there but its missing somethings.
Your exteriors are far too simplistic. They lack shape and diversity. Try using references images to get a better idea. Generally, don’t make everything a simple box. Add shape, and don’t just make the walls entirely brick. Maybe add a bottom footer that concrete or something to add variation.
Along with #1, your exteriors lack windows. You can also try adding decals or cracks and stuff to make it look better.
Work on adding pathways into the buildings, maybe some stuff outside like grass and flowers to make it look more realistic.
Going back to #1, try using reference images for everything so you get a better general idea of what its supposed to look like.
Overall, your build is really getting there, but these small improvements can make a huge difference!
Why did you show 2 license plates?
The exteriors are too bland, and the 3rd picture looks pretty bad. I suggest spending some more time on the 3rd part, add detail and fix some things up, and It’ll look better!
You could make the text more bold so it stands out from a far distance or for instance, if I was walking by I could tell what it states more clearly.
The color on the building is just black, which is quite simple to my standard. You could maybe add some different colors so it’s not just a boring looking build.
Here is the links for colors, for future references for the build color:
I appreciate that. What’s your discord. Can I get a sample of your work? I need a Builder or scripter as the old one got fired for free modelling. We are re making the things he messed.
We can arrange things on discord, but if you want to hire another developer this isn’t the category to do so. For future references refer to the guide. (:
Again, with the first image, you just need more details because it looks way too boxy in my opinion.
With both of the license plates I think there could be more detail, because right now it just looks computer generated and in real life in my state they don’t really look like that. I just maybe needs some dirt, gloss, or some kind of material.
I like the texture you added to the roof, it reminds me of slate. It makes it a bit more realistic but yet again you could do with added a bit more detail into the design.
Your builds look decent, and amazing i see that your still trying to improve your skills a lot more better there also. Seems to be more things to fix to look more like a station. Just keep practicing and you will get there!!
Police Station
Police stations have. Different details to it such as grey, white, black, stone material and colors to the building and different shapes to them! as for your station it doesn’t have that much details added to it as it, only has one shape and nothing else you. Could add the name of station and add different shapes, to the roof such as textures and. Shapes to look more better as showed below! you can go of a image to improve your skills a lot more! It will look a lot more better if you did that and add different. Details such as flags, trees, bushes, grass, plants, lights, ect.
Reference
Other Station
I see you added more, details to that police station as it looks good. But still needs fixing as for the doors you should add some details to it as. It just seems to be a glass window add door handles and texture on, the door part so it could look! more better and then you, could add windows on top and others in different places. On the station as you can see above, to get a example on. What i’m talking about as well add! some stone material, to your building and implement different textures to it to look more better!!
License Plate
The plate you made looks good, however i’ll add some realistic texture so it won’t look unrealistic. I would recommend you do that as @ModernJokes provided you with a image. On how to make your plate look like!! As well the second one as well you could, do the same and add a texture to it to look more better.
Overall you have done a great job, on your builds keep it up.
