Feedback on the desk/computer i built

hello I’m was fairly new to building when i made this and i still am but when i made it it took me about an hour and i was quite proud of it. maybe not the chair and the mouse but i liked the desk and the monitor

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It looks really nice. It’s a bit ‘blocky’, but everything is when you start building for the first time.

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yeah i agree its a bit blocky ill try and improve on that

The keyboard keys are a bit blocky. I would suggest making them thinner, shorter, with some wedges and corner wedges bordering it.

I agree I was extremely new to building when I made this, thanks for the feedback

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thank youuu! =D for the feedback

I like it a lot! I see you used the videos feature added in last year, very unique!

Yeah I did, I made this build like a few days after it came out

it looks really good for a first-time builder, however, it needs more realistic details, much like real-life computers.

I recommend using plugins, there are a lot of them that can make your builds and models a lot detailed.

I use a lot of them, here are the most important ones I use:

Plugins

Stravant - ResizeAlign - Roblox
Stravant - Model Reflect - Roblox
Stravant - MaterialFlip - Roblox
Stravant - GapFill & Extrude - Roblox
Model Resize Plugin 2.1 [ DRAG TO RESIZE! ] - Roblox
Light Editor - Roblox
Building Tools by F3X (Plugin) - Roblox

I hope this comes in use.

Thank you! Ill try using these plugins.

It looks great, I would use less blocks though.

This looks great!
But maybe use fewer blocks, and make the keyboard look less blocky.
Other than that, This looks amazing. :slightly_smiling_face:

Everything is very “square”, you should try modeling in Blender.

Its a good build but the hard drive itself is the same color as the table i rekon you should make the hard drive darker. Apart from that good work.

Screen: Perfect :ok_hand:
Keyboard: Low detail but will do the job
Mouse: Too tall
PC: Too blocky
Desk: Good
Chair: Blocky but looks good

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Nothing really bad, the keyboard keys seem pretty big, maybe resize them and fit them better, also the mouse looks a little blocky aswell as the main PC part. The chair stands out to me a LOT, The wheel’s just don’t fit with it, other than that it looks good!

@jug_1000 , you are currently showcasing some fabulous looking Kitchen Appliances on a separate post at the moment. Do you have any feedback and tips for @TheReindeerDev (and me) on how to progress towards your levels of detail?

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I’m going to redo the mouse/chair/keyboard and stuff because I agree it’s really blocky. I’ll try put in a little more effort this time, I just got tired after the desk lol.

Ok, I use a cube on blender then use the bevel modifer and that helps make it less blocky and I use the cylinder to get a lot of the shapes I use. :grin: :grin: :grin:

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Looking good! My recommendation is to download some plugins to smooth out your builds and make them look less-blocky.
What I recommend to start with;

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