Hey! I’m currently working on my first published game and wanted feedback on the beginning map. Nothing is scripted, and the style is totally different from what I specialize in (1 off builds with realistic proportions and high part counts) so any feedback will be extremely helpful!
The biggest issue I see with it personally is the open space, something I have no clue how to solve.
Quality isn’t meant to be exceptional, just passable for a roblox story game. Meant to run on mobile.
Game: The Factory [Story] (In Development) - Roblox
Thank you all very much!
Looking pretty good!
Some suggestions to the map (the house is awesome though) is the first thing that I noticed is how the house isn’t very cartoony so I would try to make the other parts of the map not so cartoony as well.
First thing is that the grass is almost a neon green which in real life, that saturation won’t be nearly that high. I also would recommend adding foliage such as bushes, rocks, and especially trees (you could make them low poly but just make sure they aren’t like a neon green).
Still, I don’t know exactly what kind of look your going for but hope this helps.