Feedback on the GFX I have recently finished!

Greetings, fellow developers!

I am a new Forum member and I got into GFX about 2 days ago.
I would love feedback for the ones I have made so far!

This is my first GFX:
(made 2 days ago when I started)

This is my second GFX:
(Made one day after I made the GFX above)


(don’t mention the HDRI shining on the left leg, I messed up :grin:)
I worked for hours figuring out how to use photoshop and blender by myself to make the most recent one, if you were wondering.

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Oh damn that was a massive improvement from your first GFX to your second. Great Work!

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These are really good for being your first GFXs, but there are some flaws with the first one. First off, the background looks pretty weird itself imo, and the character’s lighting doesn’t match. The character should be more blue and dark on the left. Other than that, it’s decent. And also, the second one is really good. Really nice job on that one.

This is well up there in terms of quality, no big problems, it’s pretty great. The only minor detail is the clothing has these white lines on the edges, you’ll see them on the right leg, and leftside torso

Yeah the first one was an attempt, I should have said that. I made it with no prior experience and just seeing what I could do by myself. The second one is one I made after a few hours of me experimenting with blender and photoshop.
Also, thanks so much!!

Yeah It was because of the HDRI. That’s the only thing I didn’t like with using an HDRI. And thank you for the feedback!

Really appreciate you saying this!

I love the rendering, second GFX is looking like a drawn poster.Good job!

Wow! The second GFX looks very professional! If this is only one of your first designs, I wonder what the next will be like :flushed:

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Thank you!! You can always message me if you have ideas on a specific theme/style or if you have any ideas on what you think would look good. I always have trouble coming up with ideas for stuff.
(This is for everyone, not only Armogone.)

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Wow, nice improvement. It seems impossible to improve that much in 2 days, congrats!

Yeah I didn’t really believe myself when i finished it. I was surprised by my improvement in a little over a day. I have a skill of just understanding stuff easily. So it wasn’t too hard to figure everything out by myself.

They look amazing. I don’t recommend using real images against Roblox character for a background; it looks a little weird.

I half agree with you. I think depending on how everything else looks and if you blend it correctly it can look really nice. Now if it is just a render and you slap a realistic background onto it then yeah, it probably won’t look the best.
Also thanks!

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How did you make the second one ? Looks great

I used Blender for the rendering and Photoshop for color correction and effects and whatever else I wanted to create to make it look better.

Wow the first GFX looked really bad but the second looks amazing!

There is a tutorial on youtube, I will send link for it:

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Yes, that was the point. I did the first one with no prior knowledge and the new one with knowledge I learned myself.

This looks really cool! I could have used this when making this GFX. I learned it all myself though cause I wanted to push myself.