Feedback on the outside of a 1920s factory

tell me any improvements thanks Sav


Perhaps you could add a couple chimneys, maybe some industrial pipes lining across some of the walls. Anything to make it seem less repetitive.

alright thanks :smiley: :slight_smile:

You used way too much brick here. Try changing the dark grey parts into concrete.

That’s a lot better! Now you can add some smoke coming out of the chimneys.

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That first floor should also be a different color.

alright thanks :smiley: :slight_smile:

No problem!

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hows this?

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I like that a lot more, I can distinguish between the actual wall and the frame.

thanks! ill make the pipes once ive done with the inside

try adding some snowy fog also some heavy smoke from the chimney would help.

good idea! thank you :smiley: :+1: