Feedback on the outside of a 1920s factory

SavDevv · February 23, 2021, 7:09pm

tell me any improvements thanks Sav

dukzae · February 23, 2021, 7:10pm

Perhaps you could add a couple chimneys, maybe some industrial pipes lining across some of the walls. Anything to make it seem less repetitive.

SavDevv · February 23, 2021, 7:11pm

alright thanks

Crazedbrick1 · February 23, 2021, 7:11pm

You used way too much brick here. Try changing the dark grey parts into concrete.

That’s a lot better! Now you can add some smoke coming out of the chimneys.

dukzae · February 23, 2021, 7:13pm

That first floor should also be a different color.

alright thanks

No problem!

SavDevv · February 23, 2021, 7:19pm

hows this?

dukzae · February 23, 2021, 7:20pm

I like that a lot more, I can distinguish between the actual wall and the frame.

SavDevv · February 23, 2021, 7:21pm

thanks! ill make the pipes once ive done with the inside

MyHeadisMelting · February 23, 2021, 7:26pm

try adding some snowy fog also some heavy smoke from the chimney would help.

SavDevv · February 23, 2021, 7:27pm

good idea! thank you