Hello! A couple minutes ago I designed this shirt, it was the first time I have designed something in 3-4 years and I think my shading has gotten better since then. I was going to add a detailed design to the sweater, however I mainly created this to showcase my shading. Feel free to give constructive criticism, and your thoughts on it. 
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Can you try to put the shirt in a dummy?
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I’d suggest having the grey bits on the end of the sleeves moved over to the collar as well. I’d give it some consistency. 
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why that weird text
it is because of that less beautiful
Its a watermark. She put it so no one steals the shirt.
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Its really good! Your shading looks amazing, and I don’t really see anything wrong with it.
But since you’re looking for feedback…
Maybe you could add thinner wrinkles? Most of the wrinkles you put are the same size and that’s not very realistic.
Anywho, GREAT JOB 
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its alright because of your shading has some weird parts where the clothing is like WHITE WHITE WHITE
and then there is no design for it add design i don’t like it with no design. maybe the font should be like the GAP font
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I think adding a design might help, it looks really plain in my opinion.
Nice job though!
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Totally agree! I knew something looked odd, I will for sure implement your feedback. Thanks
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Thank you so much! I will 100% implement your feedback.
I was going to originally add a nike logo, but I think that might be against Roblox TOS as I don’t own the rights to the symbol, and then I just decided I would use this to test my shading. I really appreciate the feedback though, and will do something similar in the future. Thanks
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Thank you! Will for sure add a design of some sort, thanks.
Here it is on the Roblox preview.
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