Feedback on these cinematic scenes

Wassup Dev Forum! So, I finally decided to actually learn moon animator after forever holding it off and I’d like to showcase my first three animations I’ve done with moon animator. And I’ve been infatuated with doing cinematic scenes. So, I’ve been tweaking around with easing, camera angles, dynamic poses, all that good stuff. Feedback is appreciated! Thanks for tuning by :cowboy_hat_face:

https://streamable.com/0swnn4

https://streamable.com/cyf7sk

https://streamable.com/ip0rmw

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This looks nice are you starting to go into the animating scene?

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the animating is nice, you have learned a lot. but there are quite some flaws with your camera angles and positioning. its all moving too fast for us to catch anything, and in the second one, one person is literally midair without legs moving or something. i like how the third one is a kind of loop, you make good use of all body parts, only feedback is that the fighting takes place in only one spot, and no character moves from that one spot. also, the first punch is too slow.

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3rd one needs some inbetweens, if you want some realism you should add some anticipation and gravity between their foot placements when transitioning to the next

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