Feedback on this animation

I haven’t really animated for around 2 weeks and I was told to make a commissioned set. This was apart of it and I think this animation is probably one of my favourites.

The idea is its someone being shoved to the ground:

(Was made with Moon Animator)

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love how is legs just flop; great stuff

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This looks great! I would suggest making the character stumble back a few steps while being pushed to make it look more realistic.

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@SoFuzzyy Possibly, but, with the animation commission it was requested that the dummy is immediately shoved to the ground by another

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Gotcha! With that in mind, it makes more sense. You did a great job!
Side Note: I reviewed the animation again and was just wondering if the hand going through the arm was intended since it seems to be corrected quickly after.
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Looks great, one thing I’d suggest changing is alittle less force at the start, the character is shown clearly being pushed before being moved back.
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Basically, start the fall before the recoil

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Great animation! The leg movements are realistic! For me, this is a job well done!

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It doesn’t look too realistic, because, to me, it looks like the character is jumping backward and landing on their back. But I still think its a great animation, maybe make the character be pushed less back? I think that’s what makes me feel as if they are jumping backward.

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I think it would be cool if this played every time someone got shot in an FPS

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@cake3738 Since I never really included the full animation it looks like he’s being pushed in the beginning but he’s actually not. I’ve corrected that though I see where you were coming from since it’s easily confusing.

Thank you for the feedback

@SoFuzzyy did that with he hands to make it look like his hands hit the ground on impact. I could remove all hand animation completely though since it’s not really all that necessary

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@AwakenedElemental Thank you for the feedback. This may be due to the fact that I didn’t really include the 2nd Dummy animation which is the 2nd Dummy shoving the 1st Dummy to the ground.

Its very cartoony and satisfying to watch (:

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This is great :ok_hand: ! I like how satisfying the legs flip up. Keep the good work!

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That dummy do be pushin hard den :open_mouth:

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