Hello! I made this as a first game for the group I made and I wanted to get some criticization for it!
Here is the game: Rover A-13, Mars [SHOWCASE] - Roblox
(Note that this was made before I could quasi-script, so keep that in mind while criticizing)
First off, I want to say I really liked this showcase. I thought it was built and thought out really well.
A few critques…
I think the door thats boarded off with wood does add mystery but its relatively unrealistic that its boarded off with wood. I think a suitable replacement to make it look what you could consider a bad job (not a bad job at building it, but a bad job at the hypothetical people who placed it there against the door) would be a chair leaning up against the door, that being said it somewhat looks like it would open the other direction, so maybe not.
I like the idea of treads but I feel like they are a little too elevated. In terms of ratio of living space to treads, I feel it should be somewhat equivalent.
Here are some ideas to make it more interesting;
Perhaps you could add an abandoned rocket ship/landing vessel, half buried in terrain. I think it would explain how they got the rovers there and why.
An old mining machine or oil rig could explain what they were originally doing, like perhaps they were taking deep-level sediment samples or mining for rare crystals.
Overall, amazing game, keep up the outstanding work.