Welp i just make this tower…
i make this tower 2-3h. in roblox studio
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Looks nice, but the bricks seem to be at a weird, vertical angle. Good work!
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- Flat depth on the walls, consider about adding some depth or details around it.
- The top of it doesn’t appear to be good, try sizing up the tip of it and, again, add some depth or details on the wooden supports
- The window frame doesn’t make much sense, try switching the wood to metal or otherwise add a wooden border around.
Appears to be very basic and probably beginner work, maybe. Although that, it’s very decent.
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You could add some more windows.
Hi gtnz.
Concerning the overall appearance of your tower, it is very bland and this is mainly due to the lack of substance around it. It is, quite clearly, a flat cylinder with very few articles sticking out or caving in. To augment this, the vertical brick material is unrealistic. This may be fixed by turning the cylinder itself into a union, which will amend the direction of the bricks.
How can I make the tower more interesting?
Having brick outlines to some parts of the tower to delineate different levels would make it more realistic, such as I have done on my own tower here.
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A more detailed and stylistic rooftop would also help to accentuate the build. Right now, having wooden columns holding up a stone roof is completely unrealistic as the roof would actually weigh more than the wood, causing the top of the tower to collapse. Battlements may serve to make your build look more authentic.[1] 
If required, I would use archways along your balcony, as it would be much more realistic and medieval. For example:
This can be created with simple unions. See here:
Good luck on your tower! 
[1] The battlements that I have included are not actually functional and are completely decorative, or else they would include machicolations. However, as I am assuming your build is decorative (or at least magical, which negates the need for bows and arrows) then I class it as being in the same boat.
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I just looked at the buildings of others… and I understood… that my experience is not enough to create beautiful buildings… and something pulls me more into animating… so that I will be an animator-designer of clothes ( well, or weapons).
anyway thx you for help!
Hello gtnzZ007!
Suggestions:
I really recommend adding some detail to the walls, as it looks really plain with just one window.
I also recommend adding another window to the sides of the tower.
Overall, its looking great so far and hoping to see the results!
sorry… but i’m don’t anymore builder!
now i’m animator!
maybe in future i will be again builder… but for now i’m animator
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