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#1

Hello everyone! First time making a build. Using this as an asset in one of my animations. Any critique and feedback is appreciated! :smile:

Tree build back.PNG
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Tree Build Front.PNG
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Tree build side 1.PNG
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Tree build side 2.PNG
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#2

Thats actually really nice could you possibly send me the model?

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#3

Thanks!
Peaceful tree.rbxm (10.1 KB)

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#4

Yooo thank you dude i didnt think youd actually give me it

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#5

No problem! Glad I could help! :smiley:

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#6

Looking good. I would suggest adding more branches, just like a real tree.

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#7

Thanks! I was going for a more cartoon type of tree. Very simplistic and not too much realism. Thanks for the feedback! I will be sure to implement it into my build! :smile:

#8

I love this style of builds the most. Good job.

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#9

Thank you so much! :smile: Glad you liked it!

#10

Good detail, nothing really to change on it, good work.

#11

Alrighty. So, the tree is supposed to look cartoony? If so, great for the first time. Some suggestions would be to make a little more of the leaves, right now, it looks kinda plain. But anyways, great work! Keep on improving!

#12

Sounds pretty good. Maybe some animations on the leaves and it will be :ok_hand:

#13

WOW. This is looking insane.
You did a really good job on this tree.
2021 is your year.
Don’t stop doing these amazing works.

-AlexGamerPig