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#1

Hey can you please review this thumbnail

  • give me an idea of what a more attention grabing thumbnail should be like… so that people actually play the game once on game page.

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if you want to get an idea what the game actually is its here:

Link to game

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What are you working on currently? (2022)
#2

Also please review this game icon

You can surely just reply to the poll but a reply with some information would really be appreciated more, so that i know what to do…
thank you :slight_smile:

Link to the game its being used for to understand why i need it:

Link to game

  • A (New One)
  • B (Older One)

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#3

Hello,

In my opinion is the thumbnail okay for the start if the game. If you want to get Players I would rather to make it more professional or get a GFX artist. Prices are different per GFX Artist and the most are possible to pay with PayPal and ROBUX. The most people won’t do it for free.

A GFX cost a lot of time to design a GFX and rendering it. I would just rather to look at players design Portfolio and see what they can and what they cost. You can even look at Twitter under the tag #RobloxGFX or #robloxart to see some artists. If you go to their profile u can see most of the time a pinned tweet with their commissions!

I hope that I helped you and Goodluck with your project!

Kind regards,

DutchBuilds.

#4

hey thanks for the suggestion but we aren’t big enough to pay for gfx right now only around 1400 some visits yet… will try to have one in future if it grows… though if u had any other suggestion in what i should try myself, it would be great.

#5

Hi there again,

What u could do is make the map/minigame thumbnails more attractive with some datails. Make screenshots with high quality graphics in-game and maybe use ROBLOX shaders (YouTube Tutorial how to install shaders). You can make it with this more glossy and its more shinny. Maybe you ever saw this before on TikTok or any other platforms.

If you don’t have the best PC I don’t rather to use the shaders because maybe your ROBLOX gonna crash or maybe your PC. How u can now that you have a good PC is different. If you don’t have standard lag in populair games it’s possible to use shaders. If you have any lag in Games, then just skip this thing.

Kind Regards,
DutchBuilds.

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#6

I know a few GFX artists who make gfx for extremely cheap, dm me if you want to get in touch with them.

I mean, R$500 for a high quality GFX.

Also, the GFX is like a 3.5/10 imo, it needs better lighting, more detail and people yknow…

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#7

I’d say for the game icon you should make the background around the “New!” text transparent. just looks really low quality with that, and doesn’t help the other tiny imperfections of the game icon(I.E lighting looks not very good, and the position of the map you’re in just isn’t very interesting.)

#8

thanks for the suggestion yes i do have a gaming laptop so i guess i can try this one xD hope i can learn this, will update if i make something new!

#9

thanks for the review and suggestion though i can’t afford a gfx artist right now am spending those limited fund to promote it rather than art yet…
but surely if we get better i will like to have one in future :slight_smile:

#10

thanks for the suggestion btw the background of “New!” is made in white so it doesn’t disappear with the background… and sure i will try to make it better can u suggest what am i supposed to do with lightning i mean which thing is lacking and what can i add/increase in terms of brightness saturation contrast etc…

#11

then you waste your Robux because if you dont have a good icon etc… advertising wont help you grow your game.

#12

hey, actually am spending lesser than what a gfx artist ask for one art thats the reason, because if i do buy gfx now i will be out of funds and will not be able to regenerate :sweat_smile:

#13

i would suggest you directly finding someone that will make you a GFX then wait until you have a Good amount of Robux again so you can advertise it and generate more Players.

#14

thanks for ur suggestion well i will try if i could find someone with low rates or maybe ready to work for credits and shoutout etc… something, not sure about doing it yet though…