Feedback on title screen

I recently made a loading screen with a start menu for my game and I was wondering if I could get any feedback on it.

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I mean it looks good for developer beginners, Feedback you should try add grass and other items also can I have the link to the game so I can see the game it self

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It really looks good! Though in the last image we only see places to sit down (I don’t know what their called) maybe add a volleyball area and some places to drink :grinning:

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Oh yea I added some shops I just haven’t updated the photo yet

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If it’s possible, you should most likely change the font, because I’ve seen that font dozens of times. So changing the font will make it more original and whatnot!

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idk if I can share the game bc it says it has to be public but if you want the game’s almost done so I can share the link when its done

ok I will check it later then welp I am leave and go to a different forum

if you can, on that last picture, it looks really empty. Maybe you could add more stuff, other than that everything looks great!

I haven’t updated the photo since it’s the main menu it’s just a screenshot of the game so there’s actually some shops in that blank space

Possibly adding a gradient to the loading screen, would give it a nice touch.

I added in some shops (all of them work except for the brown one) to fill in the empty space

Are you sure that’s the link? it’s telling to download. Sorry I am not going check if I have to download I don’t download files online to keep out virus plus I am new to developer forums so yeah sorry I don’t trust it…

Also be careful if you added a free model it might have an back door meaning hackers/exploiters can put viruses or hack the game or even update the game but that’s rare also nice, you should add decorations.
Also the viruses slows the game down by spamming codes by Loop…

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i tested the link it made me save it to my computer so it can download but you can open it up i believe i would never put a virus into a file like that

Delete that, thats is the game itself now I have the game delete this

Yeah I didn’t mean to send the link I mean by that to send the link of the game itself not link or download of it.

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ohhhhhh do you mean the roblox link im so sorry im rlly dumb uh I cant send that until the game’s public otherwise you’ll need to join the group to play

I deleted it don’t mess up my game tho lol

I am pretty sure we can’t update the game pretty sure we just got the copy of your game

If you want I’ll dm you the actual link to the game on the roblox website when it’s done