Hey, so I created trailer music for one of my games coming out in 2022. I need feedback on it.
https://soundcloud.com/dom-official-505337151/trailer-music
It is supposed to symbolize a war siren.
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I like this music. Good work, keep it up.
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This could use more percussive elements as a subtle improvement in my opinion. Not exactly sure which kind could work. Maybe something in the quality of a bass drum or something more creative. Unless the trailer has this certain calm, everything seems par.
Is it even possible to raise the “attack” on the AHDSR on the sirens?
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Yes, it is haha. This was a preset I created in Vital.
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Sounds great, can’t wait to see the game come out!
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What’s the game or is it a secret 
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Wow, that music is pretty nice!
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it doesn’t sound like a blaring war siren. it sounds like a post apocalypse aftermath scene music. you might want to add more action other than just a few notes that go on for long.
and you need to add more instruments
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Sounds really good! Though I do agree with Ice here, it doesn’t really sound like a war siren. I’d also recommend putting a bass drum in the background, to have more variety of instruments. Can’t wait to try out the game in 2022!
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the infiniverse… can i be a tester or something loli see also make the music sound less like a weird flute
also imma give feedback on the logo in dms
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When I think of an “infiniverse”, Star Wars and Marvel (DC Universe as well) come to mind. I’d take inspiration from Superman’s Theme composed by John Williams, and “Portals” from Avengers Endgame composed by Alan Silvestri. I think music such as this better fit something as big as a universe.
You can always discard my recommendation, I just wanted to give my opinion 
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While yes, they do fit the Universe theme, There is a good reason there is a war siren in the track O_O.
But yeah I totally agree with you. If the game was truly a universal theme, I would have gone for a more orchestral portal 2 type sound.
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It’s nothing special, but it works for a roblox trailer perfectly enough
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