Feedback on train station platform

Hello developers! I’ve been working on the train station area of my build for about two hours. I haven’t started working on the train yet, so I’ll just like to know how the platform looks!

If you want to see the build in greater detail, click on this link! Underground Facility - Roblox


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Click on me If you want to see my avatar run over by a train

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I really like the style! Its simple in the shapes and colors but realistic with the textures. This is so cool! I do think that there are too mutch pipes. The pipes are cool but there are too mutch of them.

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I thought the exact same thing! I’ll make sure to remove some.

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I remove a couple of pipes. How does it look now?


Screenshots

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The detail, color scheme, and lighting are all magnificent!

My favorite part, oddly enough, is the messy floor. It reminds me of real train stations.

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I was thinking about removing that, but thank goodness I didn’t. :sweat_smile:

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No, I disagree. The messy floors, if there was less trash, would be great. There is too much litter though. It needs to be toned down.

The only blemish in an almost perfect build :ok_hand:

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I took away the cracks and removed some trash. How does it look now?


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Much better! Looks more like a realistic amount of trash.

You had a point about the trash because there are trashcans right there. :joy:

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Looks very good on my opinion! Love the red-grey color theme you used.

Although in my opinion the rails look very low-poly style and doesn’t fit with the rest of the build.

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Alright! I added a slope to the rails. How does it look now?


Update the rails to look better with the rest of the map. The “sticks” in the middle are called ties, and are under the rails so the rails are on a stable surface, also held together by spikes. Your rails have the ties in the same height as the rails making it impossible for a train to actually use them because the wheels would jump on top of them.

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Dang I love future lighting! Great build

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Mutch better now. Maby you can place some old posters on the empty spaces?

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This looks incredible, with plenty (but not too much) detail, piping along the walls and ceiling looks incredible, the use of different textures really helps the build pop and stand out a lot more, the colors all fit together and the plants add that little spice of life to it. My only nitpick is that the track looks more like a truss or a ladder instead, and the lack of dirt near the track also looks kind of off, considering those areas rarely (if at all) get cleaned. Other than that it looks amazing, and the lighting is the cherry on the cake, makes it look thousands of times better easily.

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Amazing work Crazed ,as always . Thought of maybe adding some cracks here and there ,since there’s also the messy floor ,I guess the place is pretty “old” ,so some cracks would maybeee work…Just an idea , Keep it up ! :slight_smile: :+1:

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