Today I have started to make some snowy trees, I just wanted some feedback. I’m planning on making 2-3 more of them.
Here are a few questions
- What could I improve?
- What would you rate them on a scale of 1-10
- How much could they be worth?
Thank you!
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I feel like the trees bend a little too much. I suggest the bending to just a little!
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These trees are well made and the holiday aesthetic is with a low-poly style looks amazing. One thing I’d recommend is perhaps adding some additional detail to the snow like some grooves and like what @ScytheSlayin mentioned, you should probably reduce the bending by a bit.
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I would see what the snow looked like with smoothed lines and a instead of having the wood bend so much (especially the middle one), have a small hook at the top of the trees.
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Your trees are really cool! Maybe make the snow on the top of the tree thick so it gives a reason to make it bend over. Other than that, I would rate your tree a strong 9/10. If you were to sell these trees, I would probably price them around 100 - 150 robux each.
Hope this helps!
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Pretty good, but us other people said maybe you should improve on the third one being too curved.
I think that it looks not the best yes its good quality but it bends way to much i would also personally focus on more detail on the colour
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Low-Poly snowy pine trees look pretty good to me, so I’m gonna rate them 5. However this number is in the middle on a scale of 1-10, which could represent that it’s not good, but it’s not a bad make! Yet, let’s see how can we improve it.
Pine Tree Trunk
Color might be too bright for a pine tree trunk, because most of pine trees are darker brown color, so I would probably change that ( don’t make me wrong, but there are some pine tree trunks with brighter color ).
You know how every single tree got roots? Right. The bottom of the trunk should be scaled enough to give you a feel that tree is actually ‘connected’ to the ground.
I noticed how some of your tree trunks look in a zig-zag shape, which I never saw in real life. I would fix that by making it straight, from the bottom to the top.
Treetop
Treetop’s color is good to me, so I would keep it that way. If there are total 4 cones ( as seen on the picture ) of the treetop, I would divide them by 2, so the shape of the treetop could look even better.
Snow
Snow idea is also good. You can also leave some ‘green space’ on the treetop to look more natural. Your choice.
Other
There is only one thing I would add and that are branches. Just a few of them. Make a tree trunk higher and somewhere in the middle, I would place a few branches.
I don’t really have a tutorial on DevForum, but I’ve found you a really good video tutorial from YouTube. So whenever you got some free time, check it out here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ThsmVhgbW0k&t=1s
Thanks for reading. 
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I think everything has been said, but I’ll just repeat 
Your trees look pretty good, I like the design of the snow as well. I’d give you a 8/10 because I think it bends wayyy too much for the amount of snow on top of them. Especially the one in the middle looks kind of unrealistic.
Good job!
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Your snowy trees you have made has a. Nice style to it i really like the snow on top, and on the leaves that’s what makes the trees have that bending, kind of look to it because of the heavy snow that’s on the leaves! However the shape and the design, you added to the trees i think it looks really good with the winter feel to it or! Just a normal snowy day however if you plan on adding this to your game or making them, to improve your building skills i would try. Making different styles of trees such as the following (Fir Trees) now these trees you would often see these around houses, towns, streets, ect. I would try making these kind of trees since your just making winter trees for the seasons or just for fun, you could always try going with other styles instead of having the same type of trees! However i do like the trees but i would assume the middle tree has to much. Bending since there’s not that much snow on the leaves, so the tree won’t be bending very far like that but the, other too you made are very well done! I would just either make other trees with branches on them. So the snow can be on the branches leaves and, tree itself those are just some suggestions. You could try doing so you could improve your skills!!
And how much could these trees be worth, well i would assume these could be worth (150) since they have details to them and they have the winter. Seasons so the price i would go for if i were to sell these would be either 150 - 180 one! Of those prices are fine since it has the style your, making all different kind of trees could be good, in a bunch of games that have a snowy environment or a swamp environment but if. You plan on making (Tree Packs) which could be a good start if you were to sell your! Product i see people charge 1.000 for a full pack of style, trees since your making different styles of them so. They would be worth that much overall that is, just my pricing opinion but it could be up more depending. On the quality of the trees and if it’s detailed it could be at the price i listed above. Anyways you have a very style trees it’s very nice i like the little bending you implemented in the too snowy trees! Hope you make more.
Anyways aside all of that going into details i think your (Winter Trees), has a very nice style to it i know it will look more better if you made other. Styles of snowy trees and branches added to them, but i do know your still improving your skills to make a bunch! Of other styles of trees i do believe your making these trees to improve your, skills or for your “Showcase” featuring the summer season and the winter season and the! Other different kind of vegetation around the area. i know it will look more improved with the final details it’s, suppose to have in your showcase overall. Hope you sell some of your product very soon and as. Always keep improving your skills to make even other! (Low Poly Creations) hope to see what else you make in the future but those are some, of the prices these trees could be worth!
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The tree on the left side is totally fine but the rest seem too incorrect to blend in with the other tree’s because there is this issue that tree’s bent like that are guaranteed to fall if we speak realisticly. I suggest trying to copy the left side tree and try to shape it differently compared to being bent all the time that’s my idea you could try out, just don’t make them look too similiar because it is noticeable.
(* Aside from that I think you have really great talent in low poly you could possibly be hired by the popular game creators to assist their work!)
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It’s pretty good except for the bending, unless your targeting something/somewhere where the wind is really strong they just bend way too much. The actual building of it looks really good just the bend is what’s throwing it off unless your targeting that specific environment.
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They look very nice and well made, and could really fit into the holiday theme!
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I think the curve on them gives the look a very unique feel, which is quite an impressive thing, as most tree’s are some-what generic!
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On a scale of 1-10, I would currently rate them at a 9. A slight increase of detail for the snow would greatly benefit it!
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I would value these tree’s currently at around 150-220 robux.
Keep up the beautiful work!
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