I’ve recently made a unique obby game and I would like to hear some opinions on how it feels, what could be improved and what you like as I would like to improve the game where necessary.
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This is almost identical to a few mobile games, although it definitely could attract a lot of players, especially younger ones so I would focus on that demographic.
I would also suggest removing the walking distance between levels, and instead making the transition seamless as I immediately noticed how slow the game felt because of that, and on top of that make the levels turn a bit every now and again to make the game feel less empty, as the perfectly straight line felt quite boring.
Another change I would make would make is to add objects in the background, surrounding the levels. It makes the game feel way more complete and adds something to look at if you get bored, which in this world of instant gratification is really easy to do.
Final change is to make it so players can smoothly move left and right, rather than a click of a button and changing to one of 3 predefined paths, I would also allow mobile players to use their fingers to direct their player, as I assume they currently have to press the arrows on screen (correct me if I’m wrong, sorry).
Just in general try polishing up the game a lot more, fixing bugs, and focus on making the game appeal to young audiences, focusing on mobile players getting the same experience as PC players (scale the UI differently, make sure all controls are working without bugs) as there are more and more people using mobile devices with roblox now
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On Stage 10 those blocks seem to be too high, or somethings up with the collision, no matter how tall you go you always die for some odd reason
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Adding to what he said, the straight line seems quite boring, I like the unique twist you got going on but it feels bland, and tbh i dont really like to too much cartoony look, if you want your game to be unique change something up a bit, the font you used is like every other obby/simulator font, change the design make themed levels/section if possible.
Add background objects and scenery, yknow, something to make your game INTERESTING and eye-catching. And make sure to make your game mobile-friendly too!
All the best of luck to you and your game
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Okay so nevermind this the blocks arent high i just had to go under them, my bad
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I definitely love the GUIs and the idea of the game.
This is my feedback:
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Let the player know if he/she is on the left/middle/right tile more easily. You can do this by making the color different for each tile/ Make lines between tiles/ etc
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Add Dev Products between the stages.
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Make the map colorful!!
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