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#1

Greeting! Before you go in game I just wanna say something. THIS IS NOT REALISTIC SHOWCASE ! Point of this showcase is nostalgia of your childhood at winter days. I would like some ideas of what should I add :smiley:

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#2

Few things i suggest i will leave below!

1 - Make the snow falling from the sky a different texture not sparkles, search up in the roblox “Create” section and get a different snowflake and put that texture in.

2 - Make it night time, during the day seems less cold and etc

3 - Surround the place with lots of trees to make it feel secluded

4 - Change up the music/Skybox, i feel like it does not fit the scene very vell. And the skybox make a Christmas type forest one or get one from the toolbox

5 - Make the snow hills that are on the sides make them feed into the ground, not just a straight stop and up (IF you know what i mean)

Those are the changes i would make, other than that a very good start!

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#3

It’s alright, but here’s what I think you should change.

  1. Add a white mist. A snowy landscape looks better when it’s all cloudy.
  2. A chimney in the cabin would be nice.
  3. Put more decor into the cabin, it looks kind of cold and isolated.
  4. The chair is kind of big, but then again, I’m playing an rthro character, it would probably look better if it was R6 lol.
  5. I think some christmas jazz music would be nice. Something like this would work. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kn4Y3sHyfsg
  6. Make some more stuff to do with your friends! Snow is always fun hanging out with other people ^u^

Otherwise, it’s a nice place to chill (pun not intended) keep up the good work!

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#4

Though simplistic in detail, the atmosphere it intends to create is very nice!

I like the music, what track did you use?

#5

Pretty good, I’ll suggest stuff though.

The fire place, make the bricks go up to the roof (plus this hides the fire going to high).

It would look better night-time, and more trees.
Also the skybox, music, and lighting needs change.
In lighting, get atmosphere, and turn density high-ish.
I like the music, though I think it would sound better slowed down.
Make it nighttime, and like the skybox would have swirly clouds, representing winds+cold I guess.

Definitely put some snow on the path, it looks out of place, and also a darker shade of green.

Looks good though!