Our team is making a game similar to the ABC show Wipeout. We are calling this game Wipeout Parkour. It is essentially an obby type game that will have spinning objects attempting to knock you off.
We’re looking for feedback on the building we have so far, all suggestions are open. We plan on adding many more stages, totaling up to about 30 stages.
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In the last picture the terrain of the mountain is really weird and I would also suggest filling in empty space with vegetation and areas filled with fake people watching. Another thing I would add as it would make the game unique is having day light cycle and lights that turn on in the dark.
You should expand the terrain to a point where players can’t see the end and or cover it up with atmosphere
I agree, we are still heavily working on the game. Thank you for the suggestions! 
Great idea! Thanks for the suggestion.
Well its look’s good but maybe you could add more easter egg or like the narrator
the obby itself is fairly bland, the wipeout show is fun, try making or hireing someone to make some art like a cartoony character punching and then the fist is the part that pushes players off or just some goofy stuff to make it interesting, right now its red white and blue and bland, also the terrain being so close is kind of off putting, I would give atleast a good 100 studs between the terrain and the obby structures, also like other players said some life like fauna and watchers on the terrain would look good
for me what is lacking is the addition of trees on top, mountains and it is very good to see by other players
