This is my first time making an wooden cabin. It’s an empty wooden cabin, I just want to see what I can improve on.
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The the door is lacking of some details, a log is missing on the roof, there is some logs extruding the side of the cabin. and the shape is just a rectangular prism. I suggest adding more props in the cabin like beds, chairs, tables, carpet, lights, plants, windows, etc. Also make the roof a triangular prism so it looks more like a roof. If you need all this requirements it will be great! 
Please read the full thread. It says that the cabin is empty.
It’s a suggestion. I would think it would look more nice if there were some props in the cabin. You can add props to the cabin if you want, I’m not forcing you to do it.
I anyways knew about it, though thanks for telling me. I’ve fixed the issue.
The roof seems a little misaligned, I would recommend putting them at the same height.
Is this better?
Not exactly sure what you were aiming for with the roof, but it looks weird. I suggest that you either do what you did with the floor, or try a different pattern using logs of the same thickness.
The door should probably resting on something other than the grass, and the blue thing above it doesn’t really belong.
Other than that, it’s good, and seems to serve it’s purpose.
It’s glass, I made it for better decoration.
I’ve fixed the roof part, it is better now.
Changed the roof, it’s better then last time.
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Better, but there’s still a hole in the roof.
Also, extend logs above the glass and beneath the door so they don’t look like they’re extruding from the wall.
Fixed it, placed one log there.
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Hmm, looks pretty good, but there are still things you can improve on.
Things I suggest working on:
-The logs on the roof are misaligned. Properly aligning them can make your build look a lot more pleasing.
-Maybe add a frame around the window on top of the door.
-The logs on the roof randomly clipping in and out could also be fixed.
-The door seems to be oddly placed. Can’t tell exactly why but maybe play around with that?
-W h y i s t h e f l o o r m a d e o f l o g s
-One of the walls has a gap between it and another wall.
-Maybe retexture the door? This one isn’t too important.
-Fix the slight variations between log positioning so they all fit together well.
-I feel like the frame you made for the roof should also frame the window and not stop at the window.
Thanks and have fun!
-Hawk