Hey, so!
It would be very appreciated if you could leave some feedback on my GFXs that I made a while ago. Thanks! 
Note: I know that the GFXs are very bright, but that’s the style I’m going for!
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Look so good!
Nothing much to change to be honest!
Loving the detail and art!
Although you should make the fonts of the letters match with the picture and color. Maybe make it stand out more!
I like it a lot, I am no expert at this, but I would recommend making it a little less bright. I understand that’s what you are going for, but for me it isn’t very pleasing.
It’s very bright, so sometimes the text is hard to read. Other than that, nice job!
This is amazing. I love the renders, and the text you used for your GFX.
These look very good so far!
A few suggestions for you. I understand you are going for a bright style. But by doing so, this makes some of the text quite difficult to read. I would suggest using a darker shade for the text. At the moment it blends in very well with the background, but by making it a slightly darker shade, this’ll allow it to pop and stand out more.
Secondly, I feel the characters should be looking towards the camera. (use image 3 as a reference) Notice how they seem to be staring off into blank space. This seems a bit off, as there isn’t really a scene happening. If they are looking towards the camera, that would give your image that last bit of depth that you may be missing!
Other than that, I love your style and how you executed these graphics! 
Wow, that looks great! For the first GFX, the writing might look better if it contrasted more with the bright background. I suggest making the writing textured the same as the antlers. Besides that, I really like these GFXs.
Where do you find your wonderful overlays?
Nice job! Here’s some feedback:
Good Job!
Love the bright theme, I think it really pops and makes a statement. I like how the text is similar to the overall theme, and also you made a great use of fonts. 
Things to Improve!
First of all, the render is too small. I recommend scaling it up a bit so people can focus more on the render, not the amazing overlays. I also noticed how the text is way too small, I would scale those up too so people can see it better.
Great job! This is exactly the style I would find on cafés and clothing stores.
Most of them are made by myself, however, you can also Google for overlays.
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Hi there!
First off, the GFX are well made for the type of aesthetic you’re going for, and the characters are well dressed to match the GFX itself, great job!
Possible Improvement Points
I definitely understand the bright/flashy aesthetic you’re going for, but I would say to have the text/characters be less blended into the overlays/background, as they sort of melt together in places. This will allow the character and text to pop more, while still keeping the bright aesthetic you enjoy !
I’d also say to possibly make the characters limbs bend and move more, as some of the positions look slightly awkward with one arm being unmoved, and the one next to it curved and moved. Also, maybe put the characters in front of some of the overlays so it pops more and stands out? Same with maybe having the text have a bit more contrast so it catches the eye!
Hopefully a couple of these points can possibly be incorporated into future works of your art, they look really good so far!
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Way too blown out. Over-use of white.