Hey there! I am thatisawesome123.
I am a roblox developer(builder), and I work for people.
The reason I am posting this because I want feedback for my simulator.
Only a few pictures of work.
Please give any feedback, it’s appriciated.
Please give feedback as I will delete this post soon!
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Deleting in 8 hours! 30 charss
This build is quite impressive! I really find a lot of low poly builds have bright colors, and I believe your models reflects the low poly theme. The style looks good insofar that it’s fairly cartoony.
The building in general is very decent compared to other low poly models. The shop in the picture has a neutral base color which makes all the other details stand out. You always want to use an other color for the build, because it makes the building have a more welcoming feel.
Adding a door level or a pull handle and different types of shapes to the build a bit would be a good way of making the shop have a more of a realistic feel, while also keeping that cartoonish style your going for. I would recommend making the awning connect to the corners on the wall as by looking at the image it looks not centered. Maybe remove the strokes off the doors because at the moment the building looks to be placed with a bunch of windows. Try placing a grid on the door so it could look more detailed.
I really do not see a reason asking for feedback and then deleting it. I would keep this open if you’re looking on ways to improve your build.
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It looks good. It is low poly just add more colors as it looks a little dull. Anyways, nice
work. Have a nice day 
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Thanks, I decided not to delete it since you guys suggested!
Thanks for your feedback! I’ll definitely check the builds!