[feedback plz] I made this game. <Boxman Likes You>

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#1

Please give me feedback :grinning: :grinning:
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#2

Geez the description is an eye sore

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#3

thanks~ What should I change? Please give me your opinion

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#4

Warning: Strong criticism ahead

Grammar should be improved, the UI colors are very saturated (for the buttons), and the textures look like something out of a PS2 game. There are pointless animated images in the GUI that act as distractions and distractions only. The game objective & mechanic is very overdone (piggy / infection-type games).

I appreciate the effort you put into the game, but the game isn’t that great. I’m not saying that you should quit, and I am not trying to demotivate you by any means.

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#5

About the description? Just removing the emoji flooding would be great. Instead of 3 emojis on one side you could use 1 on one or both sides.

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#6

Thank you so much for the feedback.
First, I’ll have to remove the emoji from the description

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