[FEEDBACK] SCP facility a bit incomplete

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Hello! My name is Lucifervonhart,
I was developing a SCP facility a just for skill a while back and now wondering i if i should sell it as it is. This is 1 - 2 days of developing and i was wondering how much i could possibly sell it for. :slight_smile:

SCP FACILITY PHOTOS BELOW

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[ CUSTOM ] SCP facility - Roblox

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I believe this is the wrong category, considering your asking for how much it should sell for and not selling it as you said in the title. I’d suggest moving this to #help-and-feedback:building-support also if it’s incomplete, you should definitely complete it fully before selling it, also make sure to get an official and fair price before selling as well.

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Alright, I’ve been in the SCP Genre for a very long time so I’ll give my two cents here. Before considering to sell the facility, you need to look at its positives and negatives,

Positives

  • Unique Design
  • Decent Flow
  • Unique Exterior Landscape
  • Nothing is set in stone
  • Good for a RolePlay Facility

Now, let us look at the negatives,

Negatives

  • Hallways are long, large, and confusing
  • There isn’t much flow between the Entrance and the Containment hallways
  • No really directional signs or indicators (Easy to get lost)
  • Not much detail
  • Copied from an online photo
  • Differences in detail

With all this being said, professionally I could probably offer you around 5K Robux for this facility (upon completion), as it could be used a roleplay site or used by a beginning group. However, to be blunt, this facility does not keep up with the level of quality that is held by major groups within the genre, ex. CreepySins’ Foundation or Software’s Foundation. I’d recommend marketing this towards smaller groups to increase your chance of sales.

Recommendations

  • Remove fog
  • Put in ambient lighting + sounds
  • Detail the hallways
  • Make the hallways smaller
  • Put directional signs
  • Make the sight flow better in design
  • Incorporate the exterior, interior
  • Make it less of a maze
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I personally like the builds a lot. Though if you want any ideas of what an SCP Facility should look like, I suggest looking in the actual site and get information there. I greatly dislike how in most SCP games particularly 096 the containment procedures are completely wrong. If you want a rough idea, I suggest clicking on these links: Foundation Facilities - SCP Foundation and Ouroboros - SCP Foundation.

I agree with ClientScripts on the Positives though I think the hallways should be long, large and confusing. I really like the fog. Though I think in every SCP game I have seen, there is a lack of security. If you can make players feel “safe” so to say, because SCP breaches are meant to be rare.

It is an excellent start. Keep up the great work!

Some areas look good with alot of detail,but some rooms need a bit more (Detail).

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