I made a few Sheriff graphics for mine and my friends game, apart from not having a background or floor since I’m too dumb to figure that out, what do you think of it?
Constructive criticism would be much appreciated!
Have a good day.
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The only thing that looks strange is the shotgun, sticking into the arm looks kind of strange, aswell as no shading from the shotgun on the arm, such as a shadow, but overall good!
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Okay thanks! I’ll try sort that out when I go to photoshop 
Looking pretty good if you’re just starting out!
Glancing at the left arm, it looks like you’re using a R15 rig. Be careful to not rotate the individual parts of the arm too much, otherwise the arm may look broken. It may help to select both parts and rotate them together.
To add more action, rotate the head a bit and try rotating or bending the legs as well, since you don’t seem to have touched them.
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The shotgun is clipping through the hand, otherwise its a good start.
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It looks more like this was done with a editing software or something similar to that since no background or lighting - textures are added I wouldn’t quite call this a graphic design since there’s no lighting source and items on the car having that (police feel) the character looks as he is not holding the shotgun mainly focusing, on his left hand it looks more it’ll slip and fall on the floor try making it bit more realistic in a kind of way.
If this is just a practice design try turning it into a full graphic design with lighting source added and shadows casting on the surface. The car could be more detailed instead of leaving like a norma car perhaps include some lighting on the top, there’s different curves and approached you could go about to improve it more further.
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The shotgun in image 1 and 2 looks like the specular is on high.
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much agreed, i will sort that out! ty
oh i’ll sort that out, thanks!
It was my 4th ever gfx and I’m atm still trying to become better and learning by doing as much as possible, thanks for your feedback! I will take it all into consideration.
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Yeah it’s my 4th ever one, thanks for your feedback! Much appreciated
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The render looks amazing! same with the pose you’ve done. My only thing is lighting.
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Is very cool.
You used blender, right?
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agreed! im going to try sort that out and re-render. thanks for your feedback anyway!
yes i use blender (30 characters)