Hey Devs, Just wanted some feedback on my cartoony bank for a simulator game! Any feedback helps! Thanks Devs!
5 Likes
Looks good but i think there is problem with the door or gate idk you need to kinda move it to left
3 Likes
Remove the gate and just add a black brick instead. Also, if you want to go for a cartoony look, remove the textures and make it smooth plastic. Good luck 
3 Likes
I would say it is generally well done. You could make the Bank sign light up a bit with green light. Also you can add some fancy windows begind those pillars, nothing too detailed but it would look more natural.
My windows, I kind of mean
like these ones, medival and lavish looking.
3 Likes
I agree with the others in this thread about the gate in the front door; aside from that it looks fine.
I am guessing this is low-poly.
It looks nice, but maybe try going with a smoother look, using a different texture might help.
Also try making the inside as well.
Hope to see more work from ya!
Hello Developer,
I think you made it look very cartoony, as you said. The colors are fine as well, so good job on that.
I have to agree with @Lxve_Brxken’s post, in which he earlier mentioned to make a black brick, and make everything smooth plastic;
Overall, well done!
1 Like
Thanks you for all the helpful feedback! I appreciate it!
I suggest you change your gates to a wide, brown and luxurious door because it really looks like a prison cell honestly.
Other than that, you could add things like windows, security cameras and plants for decorations. While you continue to work on this, you should mess around with colors to find one which suits this bank.
This is radical, Tom and Jerry quality, however, one could heavily exaggerate some of the features to make it more cartoony, almost in a lowpoly type of way
Thanks will do! I also might add some security cameras…
Build is looking awesome! I’d maybe add windows or something to make it look more appealing. Hope this helps!
1 Like
Looks good, just fix the door by centering it.
1 Like
Looks great overall but I’d say add:
- Bricks to make the stone walls pop out more
- Some windows or even a door to replace the “Jail Cell Bars”
- Extending maybe into a parking lot or some nature elements around
The buiilding fits cartoony really well either way
1 Like
It looks great on how a lively (low poly) bank should look and I like it. Keep it up and good job
It looks decent, but the cell gate isn’t centered. The part in between the bottom larger part and the paralel one right above it is a bit too big (it should be a bit thinner), and you might want to work on improving the door design, as well as making better stair slabs.
Other than these, it looks okay. Good work.
1 Like
Ideas to improve
- Brighten up the colors
- Make the “BANK” text bigger
- Add windows (maybe)
- Remove the door gate
- Change to plastic texture as it is cartoony
Looks good, I would say you could improve on the entrance/door bit. Other than that 