[Feedback] Small City Building

Hello, I’m Pleazers and I’ve been building for 1-2 years.

I’ve been working on a small building based on the style of a game called Piggy for 1-3 hours and would like some feedback.
Here is some pictures for you to look at:



If you want a more better look, you can play the game:

(Ignore the Simulator Related stuff in the game :3)

Let me know what I can Improve on, and what I can add.
You can even say what you like about it.

Happy Building ya’ll :stuck_out_tongue: Looking forward to the responses!

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This is a really small city and basic I like it the way you made the building everything is good on the building great job! Keep up the good work and one they you can create more and more and more things!

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Thanks for the Feedback :+1:
People like you motivate me to carry on building!

Looks somehow realistic but not idk how to explain it, looks awesome bro, keep up the good work

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I see what you mean now, I think its the overgrowth on the building?
Thanks for feedback too :smiley:

It’s pretty good, love the green blobs. You could try “extruding/popup” these “layers” though as an improvement, so it looks less flat. Overall good job! Screen Shot 2020-04-13 at 9.13.43 PM

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I think you could add something into some of the windows if you wanted to, maybe something fitting with the theme of the game - but for the most part I like it! It looks quite realistic, good job.

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This looks amazing, keep up the good work! I really like the extra touches (like the overgrowth) that makes it stand out from other builds.

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Looks good dude. I love the detail of the wall on how it’s a bit broken. The detail that you’ve added to this build is remarkable.

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Thanks so much :smiley:
I appreciate the feedback :+1:

UPDATE
I’m currently working on a new building, but as you don’t know I have like hardly any creativity and will most likely not know where I’ll be going with it :laughing:
So we will just cross our fingers and hope that I get a good outcome from it.

Appreciate the feedback on the touches!

Looks great! Although, here’s a little idea you could add, for vent units on top, you could maybe add a fan sound if you wish to, as it’d make it look like it’s active, otherwise, it looks great!

Sure thing! And also for a fun fact, the small fans actually spin :slight_smile:

I would say it looks overall nice just maybe change the mesh for the moss growing ont he building walls. :purple_heart:

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Interesting city build, Keep up the great work!

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I think this is great! You’ve kept the inner-city look whilst keeping it simplistic. However, to improve, I’d change a few windows to the color yellow, such as the one in the second picture above the door.

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Looks great! Keep up the good work.

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Love what you’ve done here, especially with the touches you’ve made with areas which seem to be falling apart, such as the bricks in which appear to have fallen out or the leaves growing in areas, just love it.

I haven’t got much improvements points considering the fact that so far it’s looking pretty cool, I’m just gonna suggest adding maybe a small green space next to it, or on the roof because why not? :v:

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