Feedback & suggestions on naturey build

hi i started my first showcase last night
right now im still working on it but im wondering if anyone has any suggestions on what i should add

also a quick disclaimer that the trees & plants are made by CorrivalRhyme as i have no clue how to use blender
ty & enjoy :smile:

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It’s great. The gates are high details and, above the quality I could ever make it. The door directly ahead of you when you spawn in is a bit big, the music was a bit loud and, i’m not sure if it really fits but if you started this last night and apart from the trees, made everything yourself, you are a very talented builder & this showcase is great. Oh and the walking is quite painful but yeah :slight_smile: really good

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This small showcase looks pretty amazing at the start! The vegetation and the abandoned feel works very well together it creates a scene that’s very calming. I don’t think I have much feedback to give. However i feel like there could be more objects throughout the build as it seems to be placed with a lot of foliage.

Parts which I think really make your build stand out was the lighting and the vegetation as in the area with the houses, it creates that abandoned effect to it. The broken parts on the building is quite nice, but I would advise adding more to make it have that abandoned feel to the build consider adding broken parts on the ground like shattered windows or dirt on the walls so it could have a better feel to the place.

Apart from that great work.

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Hey there,

Your game is absolutely gorgeous, I can’t put into words on how great the build is. The nature is pretty good and the models made are stunning as ever. I did see a lot of plants and leaves colliding with walls and some of the houses had grass sticking into them and on the ground, so you may want to fix that later, but for 1 day of work, this is completely amazing. Just imagine if you’d work on this everyday, this would be a total masterpiece. The music is pretty good, but it’s on repeat and it kind of annoyed me after a little bit.

I tested you game and I noticed you can’t leave the area, so I tried leaving it and I was successful. I saw on how there was a broken post on the ground so I used it on the tree to get on top of the houses, I’ll provide screenshots below



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thanks for the recommendations every1 :grinning:
ill take your thoughts into consideration

also thanks for telling me about that :wink:
i dont think i extended the invisible box around the whole perimeter

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