I decided to create a build having every Roblox youtuber I watch. This is not the final product. Please give me some feedback. There are some things that are made simple to give an “old Roblox” style to it.
Ps: This feels poorly made in my mind. Please tell me if i’m wrong.
It’s… something. I guess.
Not to be mean, I know you are a beginner. You can definitely improve your build by adding more to the scenery. For example, I think your character is inside a volcano?? Volcanos are a cone shape with a flat top, your volcano is just a bunch of ramps in a circle.
Add more to the scenery like lava flows on the ground, a fitting skybox, maybe some smoke coming out the volcano, add some moutain terrain, maybe add a dragon or something. You can google “Volcano Art” to get some ideas
The added YouTubers is a nitpick, i’m just not a fan.
Oh, well. My day has just been ruined. Anyways, yes I am new to building and I should probably work on this some more. It was something I enjoy. But it’s ok that you didn’t like it. Thanks for the feedback though 
My intention was not to ruin your day, but to give you constructive criticism. You have to have an open mind and accept flaws or ideas to make your builds better, don’t let tips or feedback discourage you from building. Even if I didn’t like it, I still gave ideas on how to make your build better. Remember: Practice Makes Perfect
Ok, thanks for the tips though.
Post closed. Could use this in the future. But probably not.
