Awesome! As a +4 years programmer / scripter (but I know scripting literally has almost nothing to do with the scene xd):
I think all the modeling and building is good. Really high quality. Won’t be so glitchy because you used higher detailed poly builds instead of perfect smooth surfaces.
I would recommend more lighting, preferably something like a few candles on the living room table. (with a white cup).
You could do better SFX on the fire. The fire needs flames, not “humid” particles (I think you’re using the default roblox engine fire right?)